Frankenstein by Mary Shelley is a
novel often read by a critique of romanticism. Victor Frankenstein is pulled in
by conflicting directions because his ambitions for science and creating a
living being who he’s ashamed of creating. Victor Frankenstein undergoes a
drastic emotional transformation as a result of his mother’s death in the
creation of the monster. His ambition for science still flows strong through
him, but the monsters made his despise his creation. “It became a thing such as
even Dante could not conceive” (60) His creation where as he once loved doing
so much caused the death of his mother whom he loved so dearly. Lead to a great
demise. He always thought it would turn
out to be a beautiful creation “The wretch whom with such infinite pains and I
care had endeavored to form?” (58) Then resulting in great failure and the
monster ending up terrorizing the town.
In the end he has regretted his decision in creating the monster and
inside his head he became sicken by his creation rather than playing God and
giving life to an inanimate object. “But now that I had finished, the beauty of
the dream vanished, and breathless horror and disgust filled my heart” (59) In
the aftermath of his creation his greatest achievement became his greatest
demise. In the
novel Frankenstein by Mary Shelley, Victor Frankenstein had been so deep in his
tunnel vision that he could not see the consequences that it would of effect on
the villagers.
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Your thesis is good and on topic to follow through with the rest of your TEAR paragraph giving the reflection a great closing, but the commentary should be in more detail talking about the author's purpose.
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After reading a few other Frankenstein TEAR essays I was able to understand the novel. Your essay follows almost the same sequence as the others, and it follows through to the end. What you could use some work on is detail, I do not feel as if you integrated evidence that was convenient to your essay.
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Your essay is not really well developed, but I can tell that you had a basic understanding of the prompt you just failed to form your thesis statement properly as well as using and explaining evidence from the book to help further explain and back up your thesis. Also when you write your essay try not to summarize. Just try and stick to the ideas in your thesis and breaking those ideas down in the body part of our essay as well as contiuing those ideas in your conclusion.